Monday, March 30, 2009

A Picture Is Worth A Thousand Words

One morning it was about 6:45 am sharp on a summer morning when are nanny enters the room and began to say Juliet and David and Marcelino wake up and report to your duty's. As i woke up remembered it was my moms birthday and brushed my teeth i noticed it was 7am and i was running late so i went outside and feeded the chickens, pigs, and horses. And i began to leave i see them eating there food as i go to the front of the house i see the delivery guy handing the packages of food for the animals to my brothers as they began to pack them in the shed. as the nanny Lisa is cleaning the house as mom began to pick the crops and as we get done with are chore's my brothers and i have to give the animals showers so we give all the animals showers now it is about 4 pm and we are almost done with all are chores as we go with are family and take a ride on the horses around the stable and we get done with all of are chores for the day.

As my brothers and i began to get hungry are nanny went down to the garden to get some bread and some apples so we get back home it is about 5:30 pm and dad gets home form work around this time we began to shower up and get ready for dinner as 6:45 comes dinner is ready we make sure we have everything to eat Lisa made apple pie and bread hot bread mixed with butter. dad was still not home yet as we sit down at the table to my brother sits to the left of me as my mom my brother and the nanny sit across from me we were able to enjoy a hot meal of bread and butter and apple pie and sweat tea. As mom began to feed the horse i was very excited about feeding the horse to as we get done eating we see are nanny cutting more food out for are father. ahhhhhhh as are whole family screams as we see are father pops out of the corner and screamed surprise as he gave his wife flowers and a ring and said happy birthday i love you.

12 comments:

  1. I like your story good job shut up.

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  2. i liked your story it was good but you should make it a little longer

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  3. I liked your story a lot
    fix some spelling errors

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  4. I loved your story its nice..
    To make it better you should write alittle bit more and it would explain your story better
    *Dalia*

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  5. good job edwin!!!!!!!!!!

    i like how your story ends

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  6. Thats a nice story
    keep it up man you have
    potential
    man
    :)

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  7. ahhhhh!
    your story is very descripitiveee.
    goood job.
    -ally

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  8. ^_^nice story.....^_^
    but u should make it longer

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  9. nice is good especially when it ends
    1-0
    d=23
    t=7

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  10. GOOD STORY TONy MONTANA.!
    K33P UP TH3 GOOD WORK AND MRS.
    ST3i3R MiT3 LOV3 yOU MOR3!!!
    J.K. GOOD jOB.

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  11. Nice Story TONy!!! I like it you are very describtive :)

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  12. Good story very descriptive I like it. Keep up the good work.

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